feedback on finished film

Camera Work:

Change in camera angles is good,
Panning up and across at the beginning of film is good.

Mise En Scene:

Good effect used (posterization),
Not playing guitar, so wasn't a very good prop,
It doesn't fit the genre because the outfit did not fit in,
Location was a good idea fits in with the lyrics, curbside.

Editing:

Very effective (with the 'now, now, now' editing),
Effective with the animation,
May need more animations.