Feedback from rough cut

CAMERA WORK:

Nice shots
Shots go on for to long.
Variation of shots
Boring
Smooth moving shots at the beginning
When writing appears on cardboard it should be sped up

EDITING:

Speed up the start - curbside prophet
Song needs to be in sync
Great idea with the lettering - original

EFFECT:

The starting introduces the song smoothly while remaining hidden in the song, a simple idea works to great effect.

MISE EN SCENE:

Bit plain
Old guitar matches the theme

PERFORMANCE AND GENRE:

Good performance
In the animatic it was said that you were going to shoot people of the street handing him things and joining in, this would have worked really well
Good performance from Alfie.

CONTINUITY:


OVERALL COMMENTS:

We like it!