Pitch Feedback

We presented our pitch to the class mainly, Alfie! We presented the song we were pitching for and thankfully no one else was pitching for it too. The song was Jason Mraz - Curbside prophet. (See Pitch Below)

General Feedback was that it was a simple, but effective idea. It will be easy to construct and produce. It was likened too some previous videos.

Some Suggestions:

Spreading the word Through holding signs with messages/lyrics e.g. Lyrics being written on the board running alongside the actual music.

Another point was that we needed a lot of shot variety, e.g. Long Shots, Mid, And Close ups. To emphasise certain parts of the music video such as the vast amount of followers through a long shot or Panning shot and perhaps on the particular instrument he may be playing e.g Guitar through a Mid shot. Close up of hands etc.

It was also suggested that we include certain cut away shots. So the Music video doesn't become samey. So perhaps cutting away to him singing in a room and then fading this in and out of the music videos story.